Alright, you can start the GUI (and hopefully login as well) ON the splunk server itself - that's good and it means it's more like a connection or a config issue!
Did you run splunk with the default-settings (eg. Port 8000) first as well? Did it work?
Do you connect to the server itself by console login, or are you doing a "proper" login by ip?
0.0.0.0 doesn't look nice! Has the splunk server a proper ip address? Is it pingable from the other servers?
Is there a firewall between your splunk and the other servers? Please check that out!
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